Feedback from missing you animatic

We presented our animatic to Mrs Allison and here is the feedback we received:

• At the beginning of our video we need to make sure there is ambient sound as opposed to just silent which our animatic didn't state.
• The conversation between Joe and Emily at the beginning should be shot reverse shot instead of the shot reverse shots we were planning on using.
• We could build up the drama in the opening sequence by having a close up of the hand opening the door.
• When the suitcase is being dragged along the floor we should record the sound of it separately to make the sound more dramatic.
• Add shots of ground level shots of the legs then move up to the face for dramatic effect.
• We need to find a good sound effect to use for the flashbacks of Joe with each girl.
• Ensure that each flashback is dramatic so they don't look pointless.
• Use different situations and create different ways of having an argument for Joe and Emily's flashbacks. For example have either Joe or Emily in the foreground and the other in the background and focus on one to make the other look blurry and insignificant. Another example would be to have them back to back sitting on a bed or at either end of a dining table, this uses intertexuality.
• Come up with more creative ideas of them fighting and arguing.
• The performance can be edited with effects such as merging or slow-mo to make more interesting and dramatic.
• Include a split screen at the dramatic part in the song.
• Reverse play could be included when the song speeds up and is at its peak of tension.