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Photographic image: framing, focus, camera angle, lighting and colour, background and mise-en-scene.
- Lighting is relevant - nice and bright.
- Image is very good - fits the typical girl band image.
Typography and text: Choice of fonts, sizing, layout, colour, readability, language register, & content.
- Font is nice and appropriate.
- Great use of colour co-ordination with the text and colours of t-shirts.
- Spelling mistakes on all of the biographies need to be corrected.
- Text positioning on all images is good - in particular the front cover.
- Language register is good on bio's- talking directly and relating to fans.
Layout decisions: rule of thirds, text positioning, sizing, balance of image and text, focus of attention.
- Text across the tree on the individual pictures with the bios was effective - gave a nice theme.
- The focus in all the pictures is always on us. Very typical of a girl band and fits genre nicely.
- Consistency of size of all the shots aren't good. In particular the back cover is not square enough to be a CD cover - looks more like a DVD. Therefore all pictures need to be adjusted to make sure they are all the same size.
Genre codes and indicators of audience targeting.
- The colours of the costumes are nice - very girly (pinks & oranges). Well co-ordinated.
- Good posing. Very standard of a girl band therefore fit criteria well.
- Hair and make-up very professional and to a very high standard.
- Direct gaze into camera on group shots and individual pictures are very effective and will attract audiences.
Overall impacts - what works/what could be improved.
- Consistency of size of shots is the main issue and definitely needs to be addressed.
- All the photos look professional and glossy
- Very good use of the sun - images came out vibrant and crisp
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